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Hello, here's one of my characters doing a Bank Night routine for Comic Relief a couple of Fridays ago.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EaZ7-KL0a90" target="_blank

(The magicky bit starts about 6:00 in...)

Any thoughts would be gratefully received.

Very cool! I quickly had a sense of the character, felt quite Edward Gorey / Addams Family.

Would have liked to have seen you say something more to close, rather than just dart off.

I laughed out loud several times. (c:

I really enjoyed watching that, very nicely done

Very enjoyable - particularly liked the way you put the audience at ease

Only downside I could really comment on was that there were quite a few occasions you crossed in front of your assistants, so a little more stage management would have produced a slightly more polished routine.

On the whole, though, really liked the character, and further development would be a bonus!

Very nice, played well to the room. If I have one criticism it's that getting the note took longer than necessary. The bits of business went well but if the guy on stage didn't have a note then it could have dragged on more.

Thank you for all the comments. I'll certainly be looking to work on all of that.

Thanks again.