Rune, very well performed, as always and before I get going I'd just like to say that for what they are the slights were flawless and please remember I'm viewing this through magician's eyes (trying to put on "lay man glasses"!), so if I seem overly critical I'm sorry but there were a couple of things I picked up on immediately

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Firstly, the add on move that you performed was a little bit suspect. It was quite obvious that you were getting a break and then you lingered too long when replacing the cards on the deck. From my experience I have found that this particualr add on works best if it is done in one smooth motion and the cards must touch the deck for the least ammount of time possible, otherwise an intelligent spectator can quite easily work out what you are doing. Personally I cover the move by sloppily handling the cards without letting go off the deck, push off to get the break and then cover the action by using a squaring action (e.g.
Las Vegas Leaper). All in all it takes a fraction of a second.
The second thing I noticed which put me off was that your Elmsley count was quite obviously not square as you stole the card back. It just leapt out at me as soon as I saw it and I think a spectator will see this too.
One final thing that I wondered about is how do you clean up after this effect? And may I suggest that you drop your packet on the table and then spread the cards
infront of the tabled packet. This will hopefully stop a spectator from reaching out and grabbing it and thus exposing the whole workings
These are just my observations and I hope they come accross as constructive critisism rather than annoying trivialisations. Like I said earlier, you performed the effect wonderfully and from a technical point of view it was fantastic. Also the presentation flowed well and helped guide the trick along. Well done
