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Here is my Melting point and Revolution feedback please
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdyP8qgknJk

ok, i dont know the melting point technique ( its not an effect thats ever really caught my attention for some reason ) so this is effectively coming from a lay. all I can suggest is show your right hand more openly before the trick, it looked suspicious keeping it closed like that. otherwise nice I think.

for revolution, something just didnt look right ( this one I do know ). It just seemed unnatural how you had your right arm for some reason. though the rest of the effect was nice.

I agree with the weird right arm posture. Think about how you'd hold your arm just at rest...it wouldn't be so forked out like that. Try to either turn your body to the side a bit so your right arm is more centered or just bring your elbow in so it's almost touching your ribs. Not quite that much, but you get the idea.