I really enjoyed that, the Lateral P***ing was very well executed.
The one criticism I have of it is, there is a lot of pointless shuffles and distractions that take away from the trick.
You should economise your movements and make it cleaner to watch.
In Strong Magic, Ortiz suggests you write out each individual stage of the effect, all of them, including the small ones like "Pick up deck" and go through and eliminate all those that don't add to the effect.
As for what Ian said, it is angle sensitive, but then so is most of Lennart Green's work, so if you're seated at a table in front of an audience, you're fine!
Excellent stuff!
EDIT: Also, it's very important to make each climax better than the last (as my girlfriend knows

). Really make sure that you save best 'till last! I thought the transpo between the two packets was brilliant and by far my favourite!
"I want to do magic...but I don't want to be referred to as a magician." - A layman chatting to me about magic.