My first video

Where members share magic related clips and photos.

Moderators: nickj, Lady of Mystery, Mandrake, bananafish, support

My first video

Postby smithy125 » Jan 15th, '06, 19:53



Hi all, im new here on the forums, and have just started takin magic more seriosly although always loved it. so here is my first video. :D
http://media.putfile.com/Smithys-Magic

smithy125
New User
 
Posts: 5
Joined: Nov 9th, '03, 23:10
Location: uk

Postby Fireheat » Jan 15th, '06, 20:09

It's not bad, i like the editing.

The tricks were wasn't bad either, but you could see the stick turning when you were going up with it, just once. :D

Nice video!

User avatar
Fireheat
Junior Member
 
Posts: 40
Joined: Oct 26th, '05, 12:42
Location: Amsterdam, Holland (17:AH)

Postby ace of kev » Jan 15th, '06, 22:43

Ok, nice video, but some things needed work.

Your paddle trick was good :D

Your Svengali tricks were okay, but you need to work some more on your handeling.

The rest were good, but most were gimmicked, although I have nothing against gimmicked tricks, just try and work more on your card handeling and card sleights

Well Done :D

User avatar
ace of kev
Advanced Member
 
Posts: 1835
Joined: Sep 20th, '05, 20:52
Location: Dundee/Glasgow (AH:20)

Postby smithy125 » Jan 15th, '06, 23:12

thanks guys for the comments and tips and get practicing now :D

smithy125
New User
 
Posts: 5
Joined: Nov 9th, '03, 23:10
Location: uk

Postby Blade Master » Jan 16th, '06, 01:22

This video is going to get a lot of "critism" if you know what I mean. To start with congradualtions for makes such a smooth quality and nicly compiled video. Also you do seem to have the workings of a great magician (I could see it during your two card monte). Just a few things to think about - Don't prolong the videos to more than five minutes, especially when the background music dies on the last minute, try using more skill related tricks instead of the trick decks, and if possible try to organize a clean yet basic backdrop instead of your house. These are just a few ideas to consider for your next video. :wink:

Blade Master
 

Postby Mahoney » Jan 16th, '06, 07:43

I enjoyed your video! I'm guessing your a beginner so I think it's fine to be doing lots of gimmicked stuff to be honest. I think it's a good idea to build up your performance persona before you start doing harder tricks. I'm sure you will soon make the move away from gimmicks as you go along, but there's nothing really wrong with it especially if you're a beginner.

Nicely made video. I quite liked the fact that is was done around your house to be honest. It's a real location rather than just a wall.

Andrew
User avatar
Mahoney
Advanced Member
 
Posts: 1027
Joined: May 16th, '05, 21:16
Location: Reading, England (22:AH)

Postby Pitto » Jan 16th, '06, 16:57

'Mind blowing' :wink:

Although the tricks were gimmicked i thought you handled them well especially the invisible pen. Saw the paddle turn a bit once but other than that great.

If you haven'tt already got can i sugest you buy RRTCM.

Pitto

Pitto
Senior Member
 
Posts: 691
Joined: Nov 1st, '05, 23:08
Location: Stockport (16:AH)

Postby ace of kev » Jan 16th, '06, 17:45

I agree 100% with Pitto. Buy Royal Road to Card Magic, oh, and before Kati gets here, a good DVD to buy is

Born to Perform

User avatar
ace of kev
Advanced Member
 
Posts: 1835
Joined: Sep 20th, '05, 20:52
Location: Dundee/Glasgow (AH:20)


Return to Forum of Visual Curiosities

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests

cron