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Re: The card disapear

Postby stevebo » Jan 19th, '06, 18:12



Shaun Robinson wrote:
gunhu.tk wrote:The card disapear!


Awful.


Don't post if you're not going to construct on that. If you're going to critisize, do it properly and don't just say "awful". Give some tips and pointers. If you think it's not write, say why!

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Postby E.Tsang » Feb 1st, '06, 13:27

I think you can definately improve on your handling, especially before you made the card dissappear (kind of gave things away) And like the others said, the way the video's been put together makes it seem like video effects.

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Postby seige » Feb 1st, '06, 13:32

Unfortunately, for me, it looks like it's been shot with a night vision camera. (Did you film it in a dark cave?)

Plus, as mentioned, the first thing is notice is "the hands dissappear" quite a lot too. Kind of makes me think suspicious thoughts.

Anyhow, a simple vanish. What more could you want?

Take your praise, and Lap it up. ;)

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