Monker, he honestly cannot copy and paste the manuscript here on the open forums - it really would be exposure.
Aside from that, while he owns the original manuscript, the edited version, copied and pasted, would be highly illegal because the copyright goes to The Linking Ring. Without their express permission, it cannot be reproduced.
Mike Kras wrote:How does my parade look?
You haven't seen it yet? You are going to be very, very happy with it. Your folks are going to be very proud of you. It is as good as any pros work that I've ever seen in The Linking Ring. While the material itself reflects that you need time to grow, it is very well laid out, very professional and very nice.
Even as such, there is workable material throughout. A good offering (which, if it wasn't, it wouldn't have made the pages to begin with, eh?).
It's good stuff, Mike. Like I said, when you see it, you will realize the difference between what you've been offering and what can be done with a good editor and illustrator.
Mike.