Looking good to me! It seemed to take a little too much time to do the move but you said it wasn't ready yet so that's fine - also you can get away with pretty much anything if you patter right .
Nice job!
Kati
In hibernation but half awake - will stick my nose in every so often!
It looks good. I'm still working on the classic, so only thing I can say is that I agree with Kati. Thanks for reminding me of this move- I shall now practice it for my ACR! I think I prefer it to Marlo tilt...