by Citrus » Aug 18th, '06, 14:04
Hey
Ok to start with the force was pretty poor and would look very suspicious to the audience.
Also you really shouldn't have turned round slightly, when doing what you did to the deck (you should know what i mean), because that also looked very suspicious.
Genrally aswell your overall handling was sloppy in places and a lot of it, especially with the Hindu Shuffle looked very suspicious.
Finaly with the colour changing throw. Did you miss it the first time and tried to cover by doing a couple of regular throws after, then did the colour change? Because that what’s it looked like happened, so imho I would do the throw change on the first 'drop'.
Over it was OK it needs quite a bit of work but the basics are almost there.
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