by i1011i » Aug 23rd, '06, 09:34
Keep in mind that this post is being hyper critical. You did do a very good job.
The only problems I see is your (i think it was) first FT was a bit sloppy and exposed. The rest were quite good, and will be amazing when you make it completely natural.
I just didn't like the invisible wand. I think the idea isright but it really had no purpose to me other than why you needed it. Work on the rational just a little.
Good job.