It's a good trick, but your angle is wrong. Much better to take it from your front, slightly from above.
Don't have a baige color behind elastic magic with baige elastics.
You should never hide the elastics, they should be in view all the time, but your right hand keeps blocking the view of the elastics completetly, so you can't see anything but the back of your right hand.
And it's best not to take your hands out of the camera frame at any time. You don't need to with this tirick, you can do it within the frame
Why don't you try again?