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Hello,

I am new here. I was just wondering what you guys thought of my Montage?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ah_7uyf0emQ

Welcome

A few pointers but overall thought that it was very promising. Some good moves there.....

1. On the Erdnase you could see the top card slide which I fel makes the move look very suspicious to a lay audience. Try to disguise this.
2. Shapeshifter was at the wrong camera angle with one hand shielding the view which made the move look suspicious.
3. The coin matrix was editied so that the apparent transportation of the coins looked like it was three different segments of film rather than one flowing piece of unedited film. Nothing wrong with your moves, it was the gaps in the editing that made it look this way.

Still good work though

shooting_rubber wrote:Hello,

I am new here...

Hello again Brenden Palmer!
Like I told you before, you have great talent in magic, but why don't you display your writing talents too?
Why don't you ask somebody to help you out how to make a proper introduction?

Well, if everybody else is too busy, I'll help you out a bit.

You start with saying: Hello everybody, my name is Brenden Palmer, I am (add number) years old and I am from (country). I have been interested in magic for (add number) years. My main interest is (add what kind of magic). Then you can improvise from here...

I think you have big potentials, don't ruin it with a bad introduction man!

Welcome