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Hi all. Just remembered this trick after a yaear or so and I am asking for feedback. Any would be much appriciated. Thanks.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=xtrUR-Q37HY

Nice

look fine, but no patter...

Thanks for the replies. And about the patter... Thank you for pointing out, but I was interested more in the trick its self and if you believe that it is performed correctly and suggest improvements. Thanks again.

pulled off well, i wouldnt worry too much about the patter, its more of a 'shut up and watch' sort of effect. This is my opinion but i guess its upto you.

That was actually a great performance. I would only suggest more practice of the routine in general. Like the coin tricks I saw you posted that were also good, these shows are choppy leading people to know when you don't want them to see something. Slow the performance down and work on perfecting the sleight and patter. Very nice work.

I agree with Frail here. a little bit to fast like : "HA!, YOU DIDN'T SEE IT HAPPEN, DID YAA!?". A little bit more natural i guess. Nice, keep up the good work.

Thanks guys!
I understaned exactly what you mean and to be honest I haven't practiced it much. Before going into serious practice I post here therefore I know how to.
Thanks again and I might post an improvement video.