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Sinful
by armyperson59 » Feb 27th, '07, 01:52
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by JimSardonic » Feb 27th, '07, 01:59
Not a bad start, I'd say.
Watch your angles... there was at least one point where you weren't very well 'covered up'. If a person were standing where the camera was, and could crane their neck just a bit -- it'd be exposed.
Also, try to be a bit smoother with your hands. The more 'jerky' they are, the more suspicious. The more you practice, though, the easier you'll find it to keep your hand motions calm and 'normal'.
Watch your angles... there was at least one point where you weren't very well 'covered up'. If a person were standing where the camera was, and could crane their neck just a bit -- it'd be exposed.
Also, try to be a bit smoother with your hands. The more 'jerky' they are, the more suspicious. The more you practice, though, the easier you'll find it to keep your hand motions calm and 'normal'.
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by magicdiscoman » Feb 27th, '07, 02:00
nice job sinfulls been done to death but yours is certainly up there with the top runners.
its always harder to do on camera because of the fist person shooter syndrome but all the parts were there, your presentation will improve with practise so no worries keep at it.
its always harder to do on camera because of the fist person shooter syndrome but all the parts were there, your presentation will improve with practise so no worries keep at it.
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by Lady of Mystery » Feb 27th, '07, 13:19
Looked good, keep practising and you'll have it down really nicely. Just work on getting your handling smoother and you'll be there.
Keep up the good work
Keep up the good work
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by AcrylicAce » Feb 27th, '07, 16:49
Your on the right track... just a few pointers....
Try and keep your hands a little more open when you are showing the top and bottom of the can, there is no reason to stay so closed with your hands... you don't want the audience to think you are hiding anything.
There are just a couple other things but I can't really say them for exposure purposes so I will just PM.
Good job though, keep it up!
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Try and keep your hands a little more open when you are showing the top and bottom of the can, there is no reason to stay so closed with your hands... you don't want the audience to think you are hiding anything.
There are just a couple other things but I can't really say them for exposure purposes so I will just PM.
Good job though, keep it up!
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by Renato » Feb 27th, '07, 19:15
Definitely one of the better handlings, nice job!
I would suggest changing the patter. In every video of Sinful that I have seen the performer uses the exact same words that Houchin does on the instructional DVD. Come up with something unique and it will truly stand out from the crowd
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I would suggest changing the patter. In every video of Sinful that I have seen the performer uses the exact same words that Houchin does on the instructional DVD. Come up with something unique and it will truly stand out from the crowd
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