by Marvell » Sep 11th, '07, 13:30
I find that reading to children is a good way of experimenting with intonation and emphasis. Once you can really over do it, Jackanory style, talking to grown-ups is easy. The great thing about children is that they want the same story over and over again, so you can almost learn them by heart. Also good for practising emphasis through body language and hand movement, which KK has recently been discussing.
I have heard some unfortunate reading styles from parents who seem to believe the purpose of reading a book to the child is so they can "hear" the story, not experience it.
A friend of mine is a professional story teller and tells me there are numerous books on the subject. Maybe a Google search for "story telling technique" is in order. She is an amazing story teller, and tells enormous tales by heart. I have witnessed her enthral a group of teenage boys, which was incredible!
At the risk of sounding patronising, are you a confident person? A number of people I know with monotone voices are quite shy. Their lack of confidence appears to affect their voice in a way that appears that they are speaking like nobody is going to care what they say.
If you can believe that what you are saying is important, which let's face it, it is, and that people are going to want to hear it, then you may well find that you naturally add intonation and emphasis when needed. As you do so, you will see that people pay more attention and this feedback will improve matters.
Remember, the patter is the part of the trick that adds justification to the effect and is fundamental in the building attention to the climax. Those who consider it a necessity, rather than an intrinsic part may themselves believe it's unimportant and this will be reflected in the presentation.
The other advice is wonderful too. I imagine your solution is in a combination of these posts. Good luck.
Maybe some recording is in order. If we practice in front of a mirror or camera, why not in front of a microphone. Try reading some short stories to yourself on tape (or whatever the modern equivalent is), play them back and ask yourself how the "story teller" made you FEEL about the story. If you're into dark stories, try The Raven by Poe as a start.
I'm know I'm waffling a bit, but as I write, I come up with more and more ideas. Feel free to stop any time.
I was wondering if your patter was mono-rhythm more than monotone. Punctuation and pausing is a very important part of story telling.