by David R. » Jul 10th, '08, 20:06
Thanks for all of the advice guys!
What was pointed out by a fellow magician of mine that was that I did not really have a character. So I have been tirelessly working on this and believe that the character in himself has made the effect more entertaining and makes the dramatic moments that I tried to create just by synching moves to the music actually make sense.
So, a LOT has changed in the routine. And since I cannot really re-film (it was shot where my grandparents live and I cannot really get over there again) I will try to convey through text some of the differences.
I have created sort of a suave character that is perceived by the audience that he can impress any woman in the audience. He cuts the rope in two, throwing one end aside, and twirling the other, as if looking around for someone when he notices the other end of the rope lying on the floor. He gracefully walks over to it, and picks it up and ties it to the other end of the rope. He places a clip on the rope (not yet sure of how to do this, yet staying in character) and during the same beats of the music, head held high and facing the audience, the knot starts to move. He walks along with it until all of a sudden he cant go any further and notices that there is the clip in his way. So he decides that he's gone far enough, and unties the rope and walks away from it. He starts twirling the rope again, looking for someone else, but then notices that same rope again and gracefully walks back over to it, once again the rope is tied, another clip of contrasting color is place, same thing happens, the knot has moved and he looks down and notices the clip is blocking his path. So he decides to untie the rope, and walks away from the shorter end, starts twirling and looking around again. Notices the rope one last time, ties it one last time, and moves it to the center where red sparkling confetti is poured over the rope (no clapping) and the rope is showed to be one whole piece again.
The ends of the rope in my opinion represent two people, when tied form a relationship, and as they move along the rope (time/space) they hit a snag they cant get past and realize that they are not meant for each other so they separate. This happens again with the second tying and untying. And with the third tying, the red confetti is poured over the rope (red like love, and shiny to show well on stage) and rope is shown as one (the two people have come together as one).
And as weird as it may sound, I have created a character, a story, and therefore all moves now make sense.
Also, I have gotten rid of the clapping, and I'm pretty sure that dance moves do not fit with my character so those will be gone too. Finally, as mentioned there will be red confetti.
Mr. Tyler brought up a good point too, and I will try to put a lot more emphasis during the magic moment in a way that will make everything bold, yet still fit my character (however I don't think that should be a problem because my character is bold).
Thanks for all your help guys and please keep the ideas coming!
~David