Farlsborough wrote:My advice would simply be to try to enjoy the performance, and their reactions and interactions. If you separate yourself, thinking "I'm the magician, I must get out my script flawlessly..." you'll be very nervous and won't feel part of the situation necessarily. If you enjoy it, share jokes with them, ask them questions about themselves in between tricks etc. it becomes much more about people just meeting and chatting, with some magic thrown in. Much more natural.
This is a great piece of advice here. Definatley worth remembering.
It's good to hear you're putting some thought into your presentation. Most new magicians tend to focus only on learning a large number of effects, and tend to think that's all it takes to be a good magician.
I'm afraid it's a difficult question to answer really - because being able to improvise your patter is kind of an "aquired skill"....which only comes with time. If you've only been doing magic for 8 months - don't worry too much....you've got years ahead of you to perfect the art of thinking on the spot. The more you worry, the more your audience will be able to see it in your performance, and will probably end up being awkward for you.
If you spend sometime writing a short script for each of your effects, and rehearse the words until you know them perfectly, you will feel much more confident with being able to improvise on them when needed.
I think there's a few good presentation tips in the back of "Expert Card Technique" (it's a book worth getting for the rest of the material in there to be honest).....but the best piece of advice I can give you is to forget trying too hard to be interesting, that always comes across as boring. I normally use patter as more of a "misdirection tool" than a way of seeming more fascinating to the spectators. Your own style of unique patter is something that develops as you get more performance experience. Give it time mate. You'll get there.
Stick at it, and before you know it, you'll be able to dazzle them without worrying about how you sound. All the best to you, I hope you manage to find the kind of patter which suits your natural personality.
Regards,

Tyler.