by bmat » Oct 11th, '10, 17:27
I disagree, you do not need to show all the cards as jacks, you just need to imply it, such as, here I have a pile of jacks, First one goes face up the second face down, the next face up...blah, blah, blah, Spectators do not know what is coming so they have no reason to question anything. But that comes with experience.
I do agree that you telegraphed that one move under cover and all you have to do to correct that is practice some more, make it smoother. And yes you could have cut out the first part of the effect and made it more direct.
Gypsy curse is something you should check out because it has comes with some nifty cards and a great story. That way you are not telling the spectators what you are doing as you are doing it. They are not blind they can see what you are doing. By spinning the gypsy curse story you are moving into the realm of entertainment and not just magic. You don't have to use gyspy curse's story, but it will make a good teaching aid of what you can do with such a simplistic, beautiful effect.