Sugarless Gum (Critique Me)

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Sugarless Gum (Critique Me)

Postby Jesse Davis » Feb 10th, '11, 03:37



please give me some helpful advice on "sugarless gum" or "wrap it up" by Jay Sankey. I absolutely love the effect and got it from his great book 'twenty years of magic'. Here is the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4r-62m9x ... tube_gdata

comment, sub, and rate please ;)

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Postby screwystewie » Feb 10th, '11, 14:51

Well done for posting something up and asking for criticism. Brave step.

You do it fine, just on the cam your framing is funny, you appear to duck out of shot taking the 'gum' from your mouth. And you hold the paper open quite unnaturally. I think you just need to relax, really.

Good work though.

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Postby bmat » Feb 10th, '11, 16:43

screwystewie wrote:Well done for posting something up and asking for criticism. Brave step.

You do it fine, just on the cam your framing is funny, you appear to duck out of shot taking the 'gum' from your mouth. And you hold the paper open quite unnaturally. I think you just need to relax, really.

Good work though.


agreed.

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Postby Jesse Davis » Feb 10th, '11, 22:42

Yeah, thanks for the advice. I was trying to look in a mirror behind th camera to see whats on the frame :S I should re-film it

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