by Demitri » Oct 16th, '05, 19:50
Overall, it's a good start. However, there are a few things you need to work on:
Your shuffle and first series of cuts wasn't bad - nice touches and you sold it well as being fair.
Trinary cut: The first few moves were ok - just need a little more work to be more fluid. The major problem comes from the MASSIVE break you kept - which is instantly recognized by anyone watching the effect. Work on hiding the break.
Blind Swivel Cut: The main problem with this, was that the packets never really come back to each other until you finish the cut. Your movements were fluid, which made it look nice - but anyone who is watching your hands can follow the movements of each packet.
De'Vo Cut: This wasn't very convincing to me. I'm probably going to get hammered for this one, but I also don't find De'Vo's performance of this cut convincing. So that's just me.
My main problem with your handling, is the beginning of the cut has very slow and deliberate moves, and suddenly you SLAM the packets on top of each other. Why go so slow, then race through the actual cutting motions? My only advice for this is to work on the flow of the moves, making each one consistent.
I have CC, but don't quite recall everything about this effect - so I'm not sure if this is already in there - BUT - I think this needs better buildup. With the three cards already out on the table, a smart spectator will assume you have SOMEHOW set up the mates to come. I'd say work out a way to produce the first three cards in a seemingly random manner (for instance, you can have three spectators and force the first three cards), and work this routine from there. That way, it will seem more impromptu, rather than staged.
As for the effect itself - it's a great start. With a little work, it will be even more powerful.