Hi kingkongkoyle1
Congratulations on getting started on your magic journey. As opposed to me, you're starting when your still young (and not an old fart like me

).
I can appreciate that you want to show what you have learned and getting comments on ones handling is important. But, it's also important to not show things too soon. You said that you practiced this sleight for a day before making the movie and that's too short a time to get it right i think.
I'm a coin guy myself, I can't do that sleight, and actually I never knew how they do it. Now I do, thanks to your video, and i don't think that was your intention.
One days practice is a very short time. I posted my first video for comments just two days ago and I had been practicing that illusion for around 2-3 months almost daily. My advice would be to practice a lot more before publishing a video of your work and really watch it yourself with your most critical eyeglasses on before uploading it. That would lend you the more respect within this community I think.
Anyway, best wishes with your magic! It's obvious that your on the right track anyway.