by Demitri » Nov 27th, '06, 20:02
You did an admirable job here - but this video is one of many that teaches perhaps the most important lesson we can learn in magic.
Buy the original effect.
It is very obvious that you don't fully understand all of the mechanics and nuances of this effect. Judging by your handling, I'm assuming you learned this from a video of someone else who learned it in the same way. Your handling is often times fidgeting and incredibly suspicious - and as a result the strength of the overall effect is diminished. These hurdles can be overcome by checking out the source material (this effect was created by Darwin Ortiz, in case you're interested).
To make a few comments on your handling:
You show the 2 of hearts on the bottom, then go into a really sketchy "shuffle" sequence that looks incredibly dodgy.
Your handling of d's is a bit rough as well. You aren't being natural about it. You take a while to get ready, and you are almost constantly "squaring" everything up after you display the face up card. Your turnovers suffer from similar problems.
Throughout the routine you improvise moves and reorder the cards in order to continue your progress. Study of the original effect (and even the variations that are all over the place) will open your eyes to the true power of this effect. One of the most beautiful aspects of this effect is how straightforward it can be. There is no need for you to fiddle with the cards like you're doing. This problem comes from learning from a video of a performance, not an instructional video or text.
My advice would be to check out Darwin Ortiz' original handling - which you can find in his book At the Card Table. However, to kill two birds with one stone, I would highly recommend Gregory Wilson's Double Take DVD. Along with teaching multiple variations of DL's (which will help you with this and many other effects), it also teaches Jumping Gemini (a variation - not the original handling) which you may find incredibly useful in perfecting this effect.
As a first submission this shows a great deal of potential. However, I recommend that you study the original material, not internet videos of performances. Your magic will be much stronger as a result.