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Having listened to comments here is my revised trailer...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nu5iGlTG8Is

Let me know what you think!

James Brown

Nice!

And, as a sidenote, our local Morrisons store does very nice small condiment pots... hotel sized—jams, pickles, spreads and preserves!

Very nice James!

Now it really communicates the feelings and the impact the magic had. I also liked the original, but I am sure this is better from and advert perspective..

Maybe you could add one or two lines about the major prizes and recognisions you won e.g. that you are member of the magical circle etc? Well, I am not really into advertising so not sure how this would affect viewers?