by majortom » Mar 27th, '07, 19:41
Very good performances.
You have a very good performance style. Very confident, clear, and nicely presented.
However, i think the svengali routines need some work. There are people on this forum that would be better at giving advice about structuring routines than me, but a few pointers.
- You need to make some kind of magical gesture, when the queen is supposedly jumping through the pack.
- Don't reveal the queen so often, and so quickly, you need to build up the moments more. To me there were bits that screamed TRICK DECK.
- For example when you cut the pack into 4 piles and had a pile selected to reveal queen on top. Gather them up, cut a few times, then divide into 4 again, instead of having another pile pointed to streight away. That will make it stronger.
THIS IS NOT CRITICISM, JUST ADVICE.