by Phas3r » Aug 15th, '07, 02:44
Hi
Im also new here so there is lots of more experienced magician around.
I enjoyed your ideas and technics globaly, the variation with the 2 jokers is really fun. The quality of video and sound was good and the music choice interesting.
But i also saw a big lack of storylines, wich is mainly why you couldnt explain what you did. You should not have to explain an effect after its done, it should be done while your doing the trick and at the precise moment when your spec realize what is going to happen, bang! Too late the magic happend.
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For example i present my Ambitious CR as an old trick someone showed me one day. He got me to pick a card ( FAn and make spec pick a card) a normal card, similar to every others card in the deck, it had a blue back like this one you have and all the others in my hand. But he asked me to sign it with this big black marker he gave me... It then become an unique card, in fact it was the only card in the world i ever had signed...
He lost the card in the middle of the deck somewhere, im not really sure where and told me he had a magic finger snap! That every time he would snap his finger he could control an unique object, anything even my card. As soon as he snapped his finger the card seemed to magicly raise on the top of the deck...
(Well im french so it differ a lot from my original story but i think its still good)
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You know where im going with this? Just like me last year, you have practiced and practiced and also practiced a lot but you didnt build a story line and a character yet. Both are very important to cause magic to happen.
You look like a promising magician and im looking forward to see more from you.