I'll be honest...I liked it
The camera could be better quality, but hey, its on youtube, they size it all down and mess around with the file format anyways, so no biggy there...would have been cool to see some slo-motion parts, but hey, again, unless you have the right kind of video editing software then its hard to do.
I liked it though, music was good, and it was good as it didnt come across as 'look at all these cool flourishes I can do that you cant' as many youtube vids do now-a-days - so well done you
Dan