Agree with Lommy and Dale - honestly, I'd re-think what you're trying to do with the photograph.
A good photograph could be a massive boon to your website/webcard/whatever, but it needs a bit of thought, and would ideally be done by a professional but even if you're not going to go pro, you can think carefully about what it needs to achieve.
I can see your line of thinking... "I need a photo of me. And I should make it look all mysterious and mentalism-y." But your photo says so much more - are you a fun person, a happy person, a friendly person - are they going to have a good time if they hire you? Even mentalists with austere looking images often have a wry smile on their faces which suggests fun and approachability.
I think you've opened yourself up to quite a lot of "feedback" here Harry so I want to be gentle, but I really do think that unless you are an older, well established mentalist who can pull off a stern mysterious gaze, you run a high risk of your photo looking a bit like a petulant or sulky faced youngster, which is exactly what I
wouldn't want if I was looking to hire an entertainer. And with all due respect (because youre clearly getting out there, performing, promoting yourself etc. which is great) this is what I see when I look at those photos, even the photoshopped ones.
My suggestions in order of preference would be:
1) a professional photo with correct make-up, lighting and use of props that would manage to maintain an air of mystery whilst making you look like a fun and likeable entertainer.
2) An action shot of someone reacting well or some involved situation (i.e. their hands sandwiched between yours as you bend or coin or some such); you having a smile and an air of confidence, showing you really do work well with people.
3) No photo at all.
Dale's thing about smiley eyes is great advice - practice holding something over your nose/mouth/lower face and smiling with the eyes - you feel stupid but it's probably worth it!
All the best
