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hey,

i worked a lot on this, its a mix of lot of moves i picked up and also few moves i came up with to fix some problems..
just want to hear your thoughts and comments i know there are lots of pen and coin tricks out there so i tried to pick up the pace.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PretSLv85ns

thanks

Good effort. It's obvious that you've spent time on this. I think your next step would be to focus on your script and to relax a little more. Once your script is down you'll probably relax automatically anyway

Thats a lot of magic right there. I think 3 minutes of appearing and disappearing is an awful lot, and whilst it is competently performed, after a while it gets a little samey. I think you'd be better off deciding on a minute of your best material and having a shorter, more punchy routine.

You right I will mAke a one minute piece out of it

obviously put a lot of thought into the routine which is great but I agree with comments so far, less is more and work on your patter/script a bit more too. otherwise WELL DONE!