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hds02115 wrote:Very smooth and well performed. I guess to me, but probably this is just because I'm a magicain, you are touching the cards to the deck too often, of course to get the double lifts, but I think it looks suspisous when you take a tabled card, then place it on the deck before turning it over, the natural thing would just be to turn it over, that's my major beef with the DL, it's got it's place, but things like that are definatly flawes with the move.
As for the routine though, I'm sure it's great with normal audiances and like I said the stuff I mentioned is probably because I know what to look for. Well done.
Dye Vernon wrote:I too applaud you trying to come up with something original and very brave to share it too.
Few things.
I like that it is impromptu.
Overall, I don't like fusing two tricks into one. Ambitious Card doesn't need to be ended with another trick, doesn't need card to wallet, card to wherever or anniversary waltz.
Anniversary Waltz is a beautiful trick on its own. It's perfect. Simple, direct, powerful and an AMAZING leave behind. I have been to people's houses I've performed that for and they still have the card on a pin board or the fridge years after.
If we agree that the only reason to change a classic trick is to improve it, I fail to see what the improvement is here, aside from the fact that you do away with the DF card. Now, to me, that doubler facer they are left with is one of the strong points of the routine.
Your get ready for your doubles is unnatural, imho. And you do it a lot. It just looks suspicious. I prefer just to toy with the cards and spread them out, square them and get the double. For the double off the bottom, I'd prefer a pinky pull down.
Not sure about the flicking of the card you do repeatedly when you are holding the two cards? I know you are trying to establish a funny thing as normal before you do the move, but if you do that, you need to do it throughout, not just before.
Overall though, slow down. You seem to rush, and that creates a sense of confusion.
Well done for being creative and for sharing though. I'd love to see you original ideas, rather than fusing existing effects.
Dye Vernon wrote:Overall, I don't like fusing two tricks into one.
hds02115 wrote:Dye Vernon wrote:Overall, I don't like fusing two tricks into one.
Why? It takes a trick and turns it into a routine.
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