Here I am, once again

Check it out, I made this a while ago but the more I look at it, the more I'm starting to see it does not look that good at all.
Can someone give me advise about certains moves?
Oh yeah, I skipped the part of ripping the card, this because it took too much time and too much MB of webspace.
But now when I think about it, it is a very important part I let out

Well I made this movie just to check how the restauration worked, and I'm not quite happy with it yet!
LINK:
Torn
NOTE: Putfile sometimes has a very slow buffer speed, as I heard on this forum...