by Demitri » Apr 12th, '06, 03:45
My only problem with it, is the first shuffle doesn't look convincing. If you are going to claim that the shuffle is face up into face down, you need an added convincer.
For instance, in a standard triumph - the weave is done, and the cards are then displayed as mixed. Your first overhand looked like you shuffled a packet of face down cards ONTO a face up cards, not INTO. I hope that makes sense to you.
I had two quick suggestions, but let me play around with my cards for a bit and I'll pm you.