by Tenko » Jun 4th, '06, 22:28
Emmanuel,
I presume that you posted for feedback. That is what I'll give.
You have to work on your sleights because the moves (jittery moves I would class them as) give away that there is something going on, your hands seem to move not in the right places.
Secondly, the DL really needs a lot of work.
And the effect itself, seems very confusing

Tenko.
Yorkshire, UK
Male, 55yrs old, Retired.
"I don't believe it" Luke Skywalker
"That is why you fail" Yoda