by David The Cryptic » May 2nd, '07, 08:00
Um... I looked at the site thats working... and um.. ya..
It needs some work. There are a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes.
And your site in general needs some work.
I think some copyright laws are being broken. Using a picture from E, do you have thier permission?
Your a professional at the age 16... okay, with "many years of experience".
Your also offering tutoring, "teaching", of magic. Are you really truely qualified to do this? Are you going to be teaching orginal effects? Or do you plan on teaching stuff you learned on dvds and books? Are you charging? IS this really ethical?
Or are you just going to help people learn, from books and dvds they already bought? -assistining them in their problem areas...
And offereing to advanced people? what? wouldnt you have to be better than them? so your over advanced? At 16?
I see problems with this whole thing.
I say whats on my mind, and I dont sugar coat my opinion.
I talked to some other magicians (real professionals) about your site, and they agree with me.
(21:WSP) Chef, Magician, Escape Artist, and Side-Show.