As a promo vid it's good, the flashy camera work and reaction shots are cool, but the ID bit in the middle lets it down. For a promo, it KILLS the pace, and all of a sudden all the nice camera work vanishes.
Decide what you want to achieve with the vid. If you want to do a flashy, fast paced promo vid with lots of snappy changes and reaction shots, do it. If you want to show your magic ability, then take some time to do a few strong effects and film them well. You just need to focus a bit on what effect you're trying to achieve with the video.
Please please please spellcheck before you add any text, nothing screams "Amateur" more than spelling mistakes. Also, personally when filming tricks, I wouldn't put the names of the trick up, because they mean nothing to non magicians, and taking the ID as an example all you serve to do is draw attention to the deck, which is the last thing you want to do.
Still, all that said, I think you've done well, your production values are high and you can see you've put a lot of work in. Keep it up.
