by IAIN » Mar 17th, '09, 12:26
it would have nicer to have a full on scripting to the effect too...
you seem quite fast paced in your speech and performance style, i would have liked it more if the ship going into the bottle had a slower reveal to it personally...
you could even tell the tale of how getting a ship into a bottle looks impossible, and you like the impossible...and that as many times as people look at two objects, and conciously realise they just won't fit or work out together...you see things differently...that you like making the impossible happen...
ship goes into bottle, everyone is amazed...you put on a smoking jacket, you pour yourself a cocktail, dance with a girl called Betty and the night has just begun...