by kolm » Jul 1st, '11, 21:00
I just noticed that you've put a bunch of end-of-routine reactions and actions (things like handing out the sharpie for inspection and "do that again" comment) at the end. I really like that idea, great stuff
I wonder if it would work if you started off with the opening line of a trick? (The more non-cliché it is, the better)
Also, I really like the song you used
"People who hail from Manchester cannot possibly be upper class and therefore should not use silly pretentious words"