Very nice work Dave! I agree with Seige regarding his comment about visual retention; in all your performances that I have had the pleasure of viewing, you display a very good understanding of this quality – you don’t rush it and you don’t over do it. You have very good presentation skills; your movements are gentle and flowing, and I think these attributes are important in a restaurant type of environment, as you wouldn’t come across as intimidating or aggressive to the clientele (which is important considering that you are a giant of a man

) !
Now for the critisism

! There is not much to criticize about your work as usual

but here we go:
Firstly, I totally agree with Katrielex regarding the Flushtration count. I don’t know if it’s just me but I always seem to detect this count from a mile away (though I have heard of someone that uses this as a bit of comical relief at the end of their Ambitious Card routine where they finally display how the trick was accomplished by displaying that the ENTIRE DECK

was made up of the spectators signed card

!) So, I personally think you should speed up this count and not put as much emphasis on it. I also prefer doing this count where the first card comes out from the bottom to establish what is happening and I avoid any movement in my thumb.
Secondly, when you lifted up the corner card it seemed a little bit rigid but with patter, as you stated, it would probably take the emphasis off that.
I also think that this trick is one of the very few card tricks that are great for kids! And yes it is a gimmicked trick and most adults would probably know it is, but they would have no idea how you would have pulled it off and it is one where you do end up totally clean!
Overall it was a great performance, it was very enjoyable to watch (as usual) and the video and music (love that Satch!) was very well put together!