Hey guys,
I know that I'm quite new to the forums, so any and all further advice on my pass would be greatly appreciated...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t0WhO-S4dUE
At this point, I'm not quite sure what direction I should be going in...
I dont THINK it's performable yet, perhaps I should make it faster.
Oh, and, of course, anyone who might want tips from me (I'm not sure why you'd want them) just feel free to drop me a message, I don't bite.
[EDIT] On another forum, someone told me that my pass was way too tense, so here's my relaxed pass. Speed is compromised, but I think it looks much more natural than before.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXzR-oAv3Zc